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©2009 ~Michsi
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And last page.

I appologize for any grammar mistakes , I didn't have the patience to double check.

Also, I think the dialog didn't turn out so great. I rarely think of the dialog beforehand. Mostly I just have an idea of what they're supposed to say in that panel and draw a speech bubble accordingly . Then when I have to insert the text I find that the bubble is either too small or too big for what I had in mind, the text doesn't really fit the panel order, etc etc.
I have to remedy this if I want to work in the comic book industry.

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This was adorable, Michsi. Piccolo's expression when Gohan asks him about *his* uniform is priceless. He's irritated but you get the feeling it's more of a habit than what he's really feeling. :heart: I remember the uniform switch in the manga, and this is an awesome and very in-character story as to how it happened. :w00t:

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Adorable... :love:

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Whaa~ So cute! XD The expressions were amazing. I didn't think the dialogue was bad, either. Awesome little doujin, I love the relationship between these two!
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this was good and fun to read. i like the idea and the realization of this. keep it up!

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I've read all of it, and it's so cute ^^ It really fits in with the story and the entire characterisation is really good ^^ I love it, it's excellent :D

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Stronger AND older? Heh, smart Piccolo, now you never have to give him your beloved turban and cape... XD
Your style is awesome, by the way -- I really like your clean lineart and how you play around with different angles. Great work!

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Sweet... <#3

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