DB Doujinshi PG4

And last page.

I appologize for any grammar mistakes , I didn't have the patience to double check.

Also, I think the dialog didn't turn out so great. I rarely think of the dialog beforehand. Mostly I just have an idea of what they're supposed to say in that panel and draw a speech bubble accordingly . Then when I have to insert the text I find that the bubble is either too small or too big for what I had in mind, the text doesn't really fit the panel order, etc etc.
I have to remedy this if I want to work in the comic book industry.