I appologize for any grammar mistakes , I didn't have the patience to double check.
Also, I think the dialog didn't turn out so great. I rarely think of the dialog beforehand. Mostly I just have an idea of what they're supposed to say in that panel and draw a speech bubble accordingly . Then when I have to insert the text I find that the bubble is either too small or too big for what I had in mind, the text doesn't really fit the panel order, etc etc. I have to remedy this if I want to work in the comic book industry.
This was adorable, Michsi. Piccolo's expression when Gohan asks him about *his* uniform is priceless. He's irritated but you get the feeling it's more of a habit than what he's really feeling. I remember the uniform switch in the manga, and this is an awesome and very in-character story as to how it happened.
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Current DBZ Fanfics:
"Errant Exile" (Piccolo/OC) - In Progress "One Good Deed" (Piccolo/OC) - Complete Read both here (and please review!): [link]
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Whaa~ So cute! XD The expressions were amazing. I didn't think the dialogue was bad, either. Awesome little doujin, I love the relationship between these two!
Stronger AND older? Heh, smart Piccolo, now you never have to give him your beloved turban and cape... XD Your style is awesome, by the way -- I really like your clean lineart and how you play around with different angles. Great work!
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Daily Literature Deviations is a group that is dedicated to bringing literature to the forefront of the deviantArt community. We attempt to accomplish this by daily featuring Literature artists from around the community that deserve the recognition, but are not getting it.
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Current DBZ Fanfics:
"Errant Exile" (Piccolo/OC) - In Progress
"One Good Deed" (Piccolo/OC) - Complete
Read both here (and please review!): [link]
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~BEGA79 My traditional art account
En esta vida, morir es cosa fácil. Hacer vida, es mucho más difícil.
Vladimiro Maiacovsky
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Your style is awesome, by the way -- I really like your clean lineart and how you play around with different angles. Great work!
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